Short poem again, but can relate alot. I thought you did great considering how short it is, you got to the point, and it went well. I liked this one alot. It was great. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Nicely done for such a short poem. Loved the final 2 lines such raw emotion.
Well done keep it up.

Okay well i dont understand why this poem has such a low rating when it soo good. it is sad but wonderfuly penned. so full of emotion and truth. keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

I think the reason that it is rated love is the flow of the poem. Read it outloud and you'll catch unneeded worse such as the word that in the final sentence. Other than that it does have the right emotion to keep it out of the Vent catergory and into the poetry catergory.

The ones that hurt us most without realizing are the ones who might love us the most : )

I am not sure about this one, it was good, but not unique, it has some good emotions but not enough, I am not critisising, or trying to put you down. I am being honest.
It wasn't perfect, but it wasn't that bad, good try, my friend
xxxxx

Oh, very sad =(. The flow is definitely an improvement from the other poems, though. Word choice is pretty good. 5/5