Mr. Right

by twisted reality   Jul 23, 2006


07.22.2006

Mr. Right - Is he even real?
If there was, he'd be able to heal,
All the small broken pieces of my heart,
That all those fools broke and then pulled apart.

I don't believe he's even here.
I'll have no one to call "my dear."
All my life, I'll be stuck in the shadows,
Without a Mr.Right to fix my woes.

**I know this poem is very short, but it sums up a lot in all that is said**

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    It does sum up a lot and I really enjoyed reading it. Great job. I love short poems that say a lot. ^.^

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved it!
    Short, simple, straight to the pint, filled with emotion behind the words, perfect wording and flow.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done, it wa sshort but meaningful and a good structure too, that was very good.
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Awwww You Were So Right It Was So Short! But Yet It Was Filled With So Much Emotion! I Totally Relate To This Poem! It Was Brilliant 5/5 Your A Great Writer :D
    Love,
    Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    **I know this poem is very short, but it sums up a lot in all that is said**

    Couldn't put it better myself LOL
    Nicely worded, smooth flow, clear imagery.
    Keep up the good work.

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