That all those fools broke and then part.
[I think maybe you shoud say 'and pulled apart' ..up to you though.]
Even though this poem was short, it got straight to the point with a strong message. I liked it alot. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

**I know this poem is very short, but it sums up a lot in all that is said**

Couldn't put it better myself LOL
Nicely worded, smooth flow, clear imagery.
Keep up the good work.

Awwww You Were So Right It Was So Short! But Yet It Was Filled With So Much Emotion! I Totally Relate To This Poem! It Was Brilliant 5/5 Your A Great Writer :D
Love,
Steph

Well done, it wa sshort but meaningful and a good structure too, that was very good.
xxxxx

I loved it!
Short, simple, straight to the pint, filled with emotion behind the words, perfect wording and flow.
5/5

It does sum up a lot and I really enjoyed reading it. Great job. I love short poems that say a lot. ^.^

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5