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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I'm the kind of girl who hides her feelings,
    Who comforts those who need to be.
    They never know how I really felt.
    Maybe I just should've let it all out.
    [I loved that stanza, it was really great, and I could relate alot.]

    I like this poem alot, mainly cause it reminded me of good times I had in school.. Tehe.. anywho, I thought it was great. The emotions you displayed were raw and sad and fantastic. A great read. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I'm the kind of girl who hides her feelings,
    Who comforts those who need to be.
    They never know how I really felt.
    Maybe I just should've let it all out.

    Yep loved those lines too!! Baa BAa!! LOL
    You have alovely flow through your poems and I love the 'heart on sleeve' emotions expressed in this.
    Keep up the good work you have great talent.

  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    I'm the kind of girl who hides her feelings,
    Who comforts those who need to be.
    They never know how I really felt.
    Maybe I just should've let it all out.
    --->That Stanza Was My Favorite! I So Relate To Those Lines!
    Your An Amazing Writer!!!! You Should Be Very Proud Of Your Work 5/5
    Love,
    Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    A very good poem, i liked it all, and it was very good, keep writing, it was well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really liked this, and i can relate to hiding my emotions.
    I hope you're not still upset about him now and that things are better.
    I do think you have done better than this one, but i still enjoyed it very much.