Lots and lots of anger. And I hope this really didn't happen though. It was a great poem though, I liked the rhymes you used, they were great. Keep up the awesome work, you're a great writer. =P 5/5

Natalie``

WOW Feel the hate in that!! I'm guessing you don't like this girl? lol
Wonderful poweerful expressive language (although of course I don't condone swearing LOL)
Brilliant piece 5/5

Wow the hate just seeps through this piece yikes

Well done

Wow!!! Brilliant! I Could Feel The Anger! It Was Awesome! Never Read A Poem Like It! Lol Your A Fantastic Writer Keep It Up :D 5/5
Love,
Steph

Though it does havea lot of anger expressed well and the rhymes worked really well, I was kind of hoping to be able to visualize what this person looked like. But your decriptions of anger were there and made sense.

Woah, great unleashed anger portrayed. I thought this was an excellent poem, deeply written from the heart, wonderful work of art. 5/5

OMG I love it. You release anger well hehe keep it up. I love reading theese kinds of poems. welcome to my favs.

WOW u should get angry alll the time u write great when you mad lol 5/5

Hehe I think you posted this poem on Nexopia! Wicked poetry sammy :D

Ah its good, that you let your emotions out..and poetry is the best one for it.

The hate and anger was so strong, and the last line really brought the poem forward, showed the real hate, what you really feel.
well done
xxxxx

Madd cool yeo

I liked the language wow it was awesome

Wow! i loved this. i know how that feels, but yet i couldnt say it like u did. awesome job.. this is rated a 5.

I like the fact that you were expressing yourself and getting anger out. i really believe that poetry is very theraputic. i would have to say that this poem's rhymes seem a little to forced and it takes away from the over all meaning and feel of the poem. my only suggestion would be dont be afraid to write a poem without rhymes.

That was boring.. but whatever i got your point lol