Wow... when i first started reading it. i laughted it was funny reminds me of boys in the hood dinamite hack boys. Its meaningfull in a pocking fun kinda way. I think the poem should be in the fun/hummor section not life ans society. I dont think it has te power to make people reflect. Good poem though.

WOW....I TRULY ADMIRE YOUR POEMS....YOU HAVE A GREAT TALENT AND DIZ TRULY REMINDS ME OF SO MANNY THINGS....I LOVE IT!!