Forsaken

by Darkening Dawn   Jul 23, 2006


Why have you forsaken me?
Why have you turned away?
I thought you cared
You said you'd always be there for me!
But you're not
And it's all because of me

Now all I see is darkness in your eyes
You're leaving, just like the rest
I can't carry on now that you're going
I can't live with what I've done
because i burnt the bridge
with a toss of careless words

Please don't go away
Please

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  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    Very emotional.
    not sure what it's about.
    i can practically hear the voice talking.
    amazing!

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    I can feel the emotion in this poem. Brilliant..

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by The Undoing

    This was really good. Know all the feelings you are throwing out here, and I feel for you.
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