A Summers Day

by Biscuit   Jul 23, 2006


Two birds in a bush
calling out to each other;
sharing secrets in a foreign tongue.

As the butterflies flutter by
dancing and singing,
their beautiful symmetry compliments the sun

A caterpillar crawling past
is feasting on a leaf;
lazily puncturing each in turn

And the ducks in the lake
ruffle their feathers
as a young child rushes to feed them.

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  • 18 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    One thing hard to find is a good nature poem, You did a wonderful job!!!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Hehe i loved this poem! it was soo good! another master peace!!!
    Thanks for the comments on my poem it means alot to me

    Keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    This poem makes me think of home (England) but wants we wonder how it makes you feel. I think to do this you need one last stanza to express your thoughts on the subject.

    Other than that it's just peachy. Even, slow, thoughtful and patient.

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Aww how cute this is! A wonderful nature poem; it really brought great pictures to my eyes.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Very nice job. Keep working at it. Your getting better with each poem I read. Loretta

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