Cuts

by Phantasmagoria   Jul 23, 2006


Sharp blade
pointing down
picture perfect
frown
up side up
down side down
in blood I drown
smile
not right side up
not up side down
just smile
deadly
drown

[sorry it's so random]

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  • 18 years ago

    by Love Panda

    So random - this is true, but a great tongue twister...

    keep it up

    october xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    The randomness actually oddlu works so well! i like the way that you've kinda captured it in a different way than other poets.

  • 18 years ago

    by brown eyes and a melancholy smile

    Hey there!

    once again, great write :)
    this piece is refreashing, its random and brilliant!

    i like how you have taken a freash spin on cutting, the abstract styles break it away from the cliches alot of writers tend to fall into.

    well done, and keep it up!

    take care,
    -hannah

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    The randomness works it's good, shanik

  • 18 years ago

    by MethodtotheMadness

    I'm rather fond of randomness.

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