The Good Die Young

by Phantasmagoria   Jul 23, 2006


Covered in ashes
falling without sound
was it worth
the life you found?
You know,
I can never stop crying
since you left
I won't stop dying.

Pain meant nothing
because of you
it's clear now
what I must do
I will write to life
a suicide note
cross my heart
slit my throat
I can tell you
we are headed
in a hell
we were misleaded

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  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Angel Tears

    I love it!! full of emotion!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Love Panda

    WOW-sooooo kool.....this is one of my faves from your list!

    i dont think it needs to be touched one bit-you totally got it on the spot!

    october xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Amber

    'cross my heart
    slit my throat'

    My favorite lines.
    Great good.

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    That was so beautifully sad...I loved it! It was so well written, had a good flow, and I loved the emotion you put into it. I think you really capture how you feel and that makes it easier for us to relate to it. Very good, you have a lot of talent.
    5/5
    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by silence

    Very good poem. You're pretty good at this :)

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