Oh my goodness. I love this poem. It's so heartbreaking, and it really shows how much you care. Keep up the terrific writing! xoxo

¤ Samantha ¤

Just like I told you last night, this poem was amazing. It literally blew me away. There's so much meaning and emotion behind this. And I loved it. You already know I loved it though, And I'm sure everyone else will too. It was a beautiful/sorrowfilled piece. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

WOW!!! i could imagine every word happening in my mind...that lets you know that its some good work.
5/5

writer girl

OMG. This is just such an amazing poem. The sentiment is so heartfelt and warm despite the tragic theme. A wonderful tribute to Laci and Conner

p.s. glad you posted here too.

Wow, that was an eye opener of a poem Kaylee. What a tragic story, and what makes it even worst, is the time of year. It's suppose to be a time of joy and laughter, but through this poem you feel the pain and sadness. Wow, that one got to me. Well, thanks for not posting this one near Christmas time, because I would have been crying. Good work.

That was a sweet poem love, with a diction that let sorrow and the mother's tears just slip out of the words you wrote. Quite a beautiful momument to those people who are now lost.

-Tainted

Kaylee --
This was great. I completely remember the Laci Peterson tragedy, and I`m really surprised to see that you wrote a poem about it. The whole mess was a great deal, two people lost their lives, and writing this poem was a great idea on your part. The flow and rhyming throughout the poem was great, and I really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up. 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Such a strong and well expressed message. this poem has a very comforting tone, i really love it :)

-biscuit-

I love this poem! It was amazing and very very strong..it was filled with tons of emotions..it was sad but sweet at the same time..Your rhythm was good, and it turned out to be lovely! Not a thing I would change! it was amazing 5/5

Very moving subject and the poem was sad but, beautifully written.

Awww so sad i really loved it you really write well it was like happy and sad at the same time and well keep it up =)

Wow...this poem was beautiful and heart breaking. It's a very sad story indeed! But your choice of diction really shined through. Wow I'm speechless! Amazing work!!!

~Dana

I followed this story and i cried when they found them it still breaks my heart

This story, a tragic one, was greatly expressed in this poem. I could feel the saddness and the profound meaning - the meaning of love that was formed, but never got to be touched. A sad, sad story. The lines were greatly put together, and I like how I could just view this as if I was standing right next to the missing women and her unborn child. Great job...

This is another great write I love the emotion it is so descreptive and put into words that are just sooooo good! Once again very unique great job, loved it
-annmarie

All i can say is goosebumps!

The sadness her family must feel to know that Lacy never got to hold Conner. The way you wrote of him in
her arms is comforting. This poem does what poems should do....Make you feel!

Oh my god that's so sad... I'm so sorry if you knew this poem. -This- is by far your best.. a strong poem and great topic. Excellent job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

OMG! I Cried...This Is A Sad But Very Good Poem! I LOVE IT!!

5/5.. Now I understood what you were saying in this poem. I loved it. And sadly yes, Conner lost his life before he even lived it.