Comments : This Beautiful Disaster

  • 18 years ago

    by KN

    I love this poem. I've read some others of yours. You right so well. Keep up the good work.. Good luck with everything.

    -- Kyanne

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    Oh my god. This poem is Awesome. The beat is perfect, and the rhyming also. It flowed {that a word? lol} so well it was almost a tune. I love the first 2 lines.

    Lv A, x

  • 18 years ago

    by bRiTbRiT

    I REALLY REALLY MADLY DEEPLY LOVE THIS POEM!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This poem is soo good! the flow of it too wow! it was well written you got the talent

    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Marcus

    Wow that poem was amazing...I really don't know what to say besides that...you are a excellent poet....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    Very good! i love your poems.
    your such a relatable writer.

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A really great write...loved your word use. Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by karen

    I love this!

  • 18 years ago

    by JUSTMEXXX

    Beautiful keep up the good work!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Beautiful disaster, beautiful poem! lol. great job!