by Jordan Smith Jul 24, 2006
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
I fell in love with a perfect stranger today, I loved everything he told me and kept wanting to hear what he had to say. |
I liked the imagery in this one. It was sweet and kinda sad too. The only thing i wasn't keen on was the layout. I would suggest making the lines shorter following the punctuation then I think it would flow better. |