Wow, beautiful one. home sweet home,
by reading it i can rell taht you left that place for a while and know u returned right?
it is a cute poem, i like it
you got 5/5 from me,
Sorry but I need to comment this honestly:
Finally,a day thats good,
haven't had one in such a long time,
the smile on my face has reappeared you know,
[Ignoring the grammar issues. How do we know abou tthe smile just becaus eyou told us. When you say, "Finally a good day." we can tell that it hasn't been one in a long time]
and the circles under my eyes are only slightly there,
[We know circles under the eyes mean tired. Why put under my eyes if we can already guess]
As a narrative it's pretty alright, could have been more decent, but as a poem I feel as if it explains too much of things we can already know.