Hey thanks i guess you were the only one took me for real. Anyways i like the poem i really can feel the words, and the meaning behind it. It was written very good at least to me. 5/5

Hey thanks i guess you were the only one took me for real. Anyways i like the poem i really can feel the words, and the meaning behind it. It was written very good at least to me. 5/5

I love it! It was so well written, it flowed beautifully and the whole theme of it was great! Great work, keep it up :D 5/5

Good poem. there was emotion, there was rhyming, there was rhythm....but there was nothing special to it. i've basically read that same poem over and over again. a 4 line stanza where the 2nd and 4th line rhyme. change it up a lil. start a whole new approach. its fun! good poem though.

Nice one, kep writin!

Wowww..
that was touching(:
keep it up!