Another beauty hun. You have such excellent poems, I am an avid fan! Keep um coming! 5/5

Ravyn

Very different. i didn't quite expect it : D really really well written. better than ur other ones i recon.

Awe! Wow! I loved the imagry in this piece, everything was worded perfectly. Amazing job, hun. You also had a strong powerful ending to it! Loved it! Keep it up.

Natalie``