Very gruesome, but beautiful at the same time : D i loved it all. Love you Emma!!!

Your blind but I can see,
[Should be you're]

This was great. I really liked this one alot. You had a strong ending which brought the whole poem together. A wonderful write. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Wonderfully rich imagery and vocab. Stunning piece. Well done.

Woweee--- I'm getting more and more impressed with each poem I read. They're all so great. This was is probably one of my favorite so far. Loved it.

One minor little thing though...

Your blind but I can see,

...It should be "you're"

Great job hun! Keep it up!

Natalie``

P.S. I've done 11 now. I've got 3 to go, So I'll do them shortly, my hands are getting sore, tehe.