My JaiL . . .

by masked_senses   Jul 24, 2006


Black spears from the heart
trying to hold my mind clear in this stupidity
claws growing bigger
trying to tear down this madness

i wanna break this this shiny square
things
lie down on the dirty floor
myself tells me to stop
But who the duck is my real self anyway

i need to throw this out of my head
her flavour makes me better
but the evil inside me is much more stronger yet
I cant make it stop! ! !

I need Her hug in this chaos
The sound creates holes in my body
Baby please come and stop it
Following your steps hoping to follow mine...

My Other Self Shall Help Me Out Of This Situation ! ! !

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  • 17 years ago

    by Reapers ZeitGeiSt

    Mou thimizei to agapimeno sou metal sigkrotima,to kartoon sou kai genika ti theoria sou gia tis maskes...nice work dude! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Miss Darcy![xXkestrelXx]

    Wow! when i read it, I felt the intense darkness, it gripped me lots! very good, very good

  • 17 years ago

    by broken reflection

    You really do have a unique style, your poems draw me in, very well done 5/5 keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. this is a really great poem.. i like it a lot.. nice job and thanks for the comment on my poem

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Humm, very unique. Nicely done. I liked it very much.

    -Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4.5/5