God, you're a jolly old soul aren'y you, lol. i liked it, not you best work, in my opinion, but still a good read. the most intriguing stanza for me was the third one.

Brad

Wow! I loved it! You described everything very well. Great job on this! Keep it up! 5/5

Very intrigueing. i really loved it, as always. very fantasy. i love fantasy : )

Very dark/haunting poem. Liked it though. The 4th stanza stood out the most to me, not sure why, I just liked how it was worded. Overall though, the rhyming and flow was pretty good. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Nice ending, and I loved all the imagry in this piece. About the stars, and lightening and everything. I also really liked this line:

Scarred the ground with emotion,

...Really great job, hun. Keep on writing!

Natalie``