These Scars You've Caused Me

by twisted reality   Jul 24, 2006


What is so wrong with you?
You make me feel depressed and blue.
A week went by.
You made me want to cry.

Weeping in self pity, I did not.
Over what I did, my friends and I fought.
These scars you have given me,
Emotional or not...there they will always be.

But emotional? Not these scars.
These scars make me feel like I'm always behind bars.
I remember how these scars came to be.
I remember all the blood I used to see.

Some people say attention it was for,
If this happened to you, what could you do more?
Some ask, "When did you, and what did you do it with?"
I reply, "I did it with a knife on the fifth."

Most people wonder why on Earth I do it.
I say because a piece of me comes off bit by bit,
After each time he breaks my heart,
And after every time he rips it apart.

Since my heart people cannot see,
I pierce a part of my skin on me.
These are the scars you've caused me.
They will be my lifetime fee.

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  • 17 years ago

    by angelina

    I know what you are saying every line i read i can relate to ... ... u should read ♥LuvSuxGetDrunk♥ 's poem its title is

    If A Cutter Cuts For Attention

  • 18 years ago

    by Topshop princess

    This peom is outstanding, it really touched me i've been through this and i know how hard it is. Alot of people don't understand but i think you did it justice. great job 5/5 x

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so sad...and you're right, not a lot of people understabd, i don't think many people actually want too...i liked this poem very much. 5/5
    P.S Two of the poems you asked me to comment and vote i have already done in the past so I'm going to choose two other ones.

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    This poem is very sad. I can really feel your pain through each word. But again here the rhyming seems forced. You have such a wonderful talent for writing that you don't have to force the rhymes hun. Let the words flow, and you will see the amazing change in your work. Besides the rhyming, I thought that everything else was very good. I usally don't read cutting poems because I can't really get into them. But this one held so much emotion that I was able to read right through it. 5/5 I only suggest that you work on the rhyming a bit. Other then that I say keep up the excellent writing and I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work.

    Best Wishes
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by NoPatience

    Rhymes Sounded A Bit Forced And The Flow Could Use Some Work. But Overall It Was A Good Poem That Really Spoke To Me. 5/5

    *~*Paulette*~*

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