The Feeling You Give Me

by twisted reality   Jul 24, 2006


My heart skips a beat every time I hear your name.
Or if you walk by and brush my shoulder.
I get a tingle in my spine every time you call my name,
And my heart pounds my chest when I talk to you.

The warm sensation when you touch my hand,
Sends my heart to the top of my throat.
My tender lips tingle when you touch them,
And makes me want to never let go.

The trusting feeling goes through my head,
Just because I know you're there,
In times of any woes or needs.
And the non-worrying high sends me soaring.

The feeling that I get when I say,
"I love you," just to see you smile.
And the feeling I get when you say,
"I love you". And you really mean it.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Krazy

    I love this. it's fantastic. the flow is a little choppy, but otherwise it's good! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This was good and well described but i would have liked it better if it rhymed lol its really good though :):):) xxx alex (:(:(:

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Great poem! It's nice to see you are in love. What a wonderful feeling it is. Excellent poem as usual, keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Cute, and not too unoriginal, like most love poems seem to be these days. It stayed on topic (according to the title) and had a nice ryhme. Good job.

    As always~ Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was okayy.. i dont mean to be critical but i found the flow didnt work and that really threw me off.. other than that, your descriptions and details were beautiful and made the imagery really work.. nice job.. if you fix up the flow it would be perfect 4/5

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