Nice! i like this poem,,, it really shows ur feelings,,, and it was longgggggggggg :D but that makes it more nice

Wow your poam is reli long but good you must have thought hard to come up with something this good 5/5 could you read my poems plz xxx alex xxx

Wooooow.... it's great ... i never read along poem ... but urs was great to read ... i hope i can write like that one day :D ... keep going

That's very very long poem but very excellent. Try to write more and i'll vote you more!

Great poem,great love.I enjoyed reading it

Aww! it's kinda sweet! i enjoyed reading it. keep writing! aww!

Awww..this poem is really sweet..shows how much u love the girl..
and yes..i am actually going through the same thing right now..loving someone who loves someone else..so yea..i guess i can relate..hhe.

keep writing awesome poems and keep rockin dude. :)

This is a really beautiful poem of love filled with lots of emotion, very powerful. 5/5, Em