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by Raychil Jul 24, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / about death
Look at the body laying there A boy, a teen, a son It will come as a shock to all The terror he has done On the floor his body lies Still and glowing pale In his arm a small puncture That's leaking a deadly trail Next to his arm lies a needles It's tip is darkened like mud Yet it hold a fresh red tint From when it contacted his blood A victim of his own stupidity The drugs he took have taken him Weren't they supposed to make him happy? And feel like reality had never been? What lead him here in the first place Was it that no one seemed to care? Or was it a fear that at his funeral No one would even be there? Still it's too late for questions His eyes are already black Dead from the world, from drinking, from drugs Dead, and never coming back.
by TRAGiC BEAUTY
"Look at the body laying there A boy, a teen, a son It will come as a shock to all The terror he has done" This pulled me into the poem...It gave me a reason to continue reading! I loved it! The whole poem was perfect! xoxo