Cold and black

by XDyingx-In-xVeinX   Jul 24, 2006


You said you loved me,
i said i loved you back,
you tore my heart right out of me,
your heart is just plain black.

i am now past the cutting,
i am now past the deaths,
i know you dont think about suicide,
thats why my present to you is meth.

i shall watch you as you get cold,
dont worry it will be over soon,
for you shall see what its like to be me,
what is this world coming too?

You said you loved me,
i said i loved you back,
you tore my heart right out of me,
your heart is just plain black.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Hey your poems are really very good. I like them a lot. Please check out my poems and let me know what you think. Thank you.
    Burning~Wings

  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Wow, thats an amazing poem it's deep i love how u ues ue words in such an angry way 5/5 great job
    auna

  • 18 years ago

    by Asingletear

    Love this poem girl, can feel the emotion, nt just wrting for the hell of it, sorry seems like you have had a rugh tym tough. but good poem keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by DamagedGoods

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amber

    Wow great job keep up the good work ..i loved it ..check some of mine out too

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