It was kind of a fun way to read a poem...
I could not find any spelling errors.
I liked that it had a sort of puzzle inside of it, the words hold more than you can actually grasp at first. You have to pay acute attention to make sure that you don't miss anything.
That is good.

//T.L.//

Aww i loved this peom, it was fun to read, and very unique with the words spelling down, very imagernative! keep it up, please read and comment on some of my poems, Kirsty palmer xx

I liked this, it was good, but didn;t fully get the words down the side (i'm just stupid ignore me) but i liked it lots anyway!!! 5/5

Your poems are very lovely. another 5/5 from me.

This is one of the most unique poems i have read. i loved it. it was amazing. the way you incorporated falling into the poem was superb.

the line about acid made me chuckle a little. and the humor was needed i feel. wonderful job! 5/5