by Diabolic Atrocity Jul 24, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Once upon a time, quite long ago |
Aw, this is so sad. It reminds me of a lost friendship of mine so I feel your pain. Everything just fit right, but the flow was a bit rocky. Great job though. 4/5 |
This was a very sad poem, with a deep message. Broken friendships are hard. Keep up the amazing work! |
Great poem but in line 8 didn't you mean that your heart "break"s? |
by Amber
Wow this is a wake up call to me ..but i love the poem ..check some of mine out too |
by Poison Ivy
I hope i never grow apart from my best friend!..excellent poem.i gave u a 5* |