by goddess-glamourpuss Jul 24, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
All day I heard you calling |
This was a really good poem... and I'm the one who wrote Exorcism. and that's what I tried to do with it... to confuse the reader with the rhythm... But I really like this poem 5/5!!! |
Just enough words to set the imagination soaring on the pale light, set one's attention on the hunt and nothing else. Very nicely written. |
by Natalie
Lunar goddess bathe me i your glow |
by Driver
Another flawless piece. great choice of vocab and the rhyming scheme seems effortless. great job. |
by Tara Kay
In my opinion it was slightly too long. it rocked the flow, but was still very good |