by Nelle Jul 24, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
In magazines and tabloids there is an image of girls |
by Miss Pipp
In some ways this poem doesn't make sense but it does send a very important message not to believe in what magazines and tabloids say. The first stanza says so much, it tells us how we are 'supposed' to be and your feelings about it. I can relate to this I'm already skinny naturally but I get upset when I put on weight even though I need to. Keep writing. =] |
Very nice poem. ryming is not everything. Poetry is from the soul. I think you did well Loretta |
Nelle -- |
Once again so so emotional but the truth is skinny is not exactly pretty you have to say a big FU** YOU to the things that say you must be that way. I have this AMAZING diet I'm on right now that I learn from my a singer at my youth group it you want I'll give you some more info on it....ever since then I haven't looked at food the same. |
by LadyPearl
Great job, I hope you are eating now and worrying less about your weight. |