Awww i love this poem, it was very very inspiring. You filled it with tons and tons of emotions your heart poured through your words beautifully..I really really liked this poem! ALOT! 5/5

Aww Wow! This One Was Good! I Could Feel The Hatred Towards This Poem! Great Job! I Loved It 5/5
Love,
Steph

In a way it was quite funny towards the end. The beginning sounded a bit sad. It's very true as I can totally relate. I have too been called names like that. Usually people say I look like a twig but i'm proud of me and my body. Keep up the great work :D Excellent poem :D

Such a wonderful poem, its great that you feel so comfortable with yourselve while other people struggle so much. Nice job

I love this i was bullied in school for being fat and boy was i fat i was 13 and a half stone but i lost loadsa weight.

its feels great when i see all the lads from school, who i wanted. now they want me and i would look at them twice even all the girl that were thin and pretty are fat and ugly now hahaha.

MAN it feels GOOD doesnt it girl.

great piece keep up the good work im gonna give ya 5/5

oh yeah and once again I LOVED IT xoxoxox

gemma 20 in cheshire

"And I ca pity your drooping boobs"
[can]

Well, kids are ignorant at a younger age, you wouldn't expect them to know how YOU were going to grow up. They lived for the moment. But I understand your need for this poem. It's great to have a good body, I don't complain. I was short VERY short and skinny, not I'm a decent height and still skinny. I like the skin I'm in too. I can definitely relate to this poem. (except for the boobs) hehe

Goddess --
This was REALLY good. You had a few spelling errors - 'patronize' is spelled like that, not like 'patronise'. And you forgot the 'n' in 'can'. So just touch those up. But the flow throughout the poem was perfect, and I can really relate to the subject. I was always really skinny and thin, but now everyone admires the way I look! It`s great, isn`t it? Lol. I especially liked this :
Well guess what? I'm still skinny
So many years from school.
See I just blossomed
While you went to full bloom

That was a really good poem! I`m excited to go read your other one. Great job, keep this up. 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

I liked it. It was kinda sad at the begining then got slightly funny towards the end, but anyway. Good job.

Ummmm it was alright1 Great way to get back at ppl! The flow was kinda ify, but the topic was very different and unique! Over all good job,
ann

Something about this just took away from it all. It's not your best, I know you're capable of better; I've read many of your things.

xDarkSuicdex 3.5

Oh, I liked this one. I remember when I was at school, not that long ago really, And I had a fallout with one girl, who was bigger than me, and she couldn't find anything nasty to say to me, except for "you're anorexic" ..which I wasn't, I was just really skinny, and still am. I thought it was kinda funny, Lol.. Anywho, this was a great poem. Very well written, keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

What I liked was the contrast between skinny then and skinny now, the soft humor in the words.

I always like your poems I can relate to this one. I was so thin I got all
the skinny jokes Now I`m average and their NOT! if you know what I mean Loved this one

Like the poem