Raining tears, Flowing Blood

by Catastrophic Beauty   Jul 24, 2006


She's staring out the shiny window pane,
At the clouds releasing their blast of rain.
And at the river below flowing so thick,
As the rain makes the water run so quick.

The rain seems like it never wants to stop,
And she's never seen so many raindrops.
The river seems like it continues to grow,
And she's never seen such a hurried flow.

But the odd thing is that it's not even rain,
It is actually her tears that her eyes drain.
And she's not looking out a shiny window,
But she's staring out of her silky eyes though.

There isn't any water that gushes rapidly,
It is her blood that's oozing out endlessly.
And there is not any river that increases,
It's the growing pain her wrist releases.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    I liked ur poem. It was good. Myabe you can come by and gimme some advice wit muh poems..i have only been writing abut a year and a half maybe 2 ..and i would love it if u would help me out.. and ill keep goin through ur poems and tellin ya what i think.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Another great poem...this is really good...and i love the title..it made me choose that poem to read for the last one i owed you(and sorry it took so long for me to comment you)...

    but there is one line that seemed forced to me...

    "But she's staring out of her silky eyes though."

    ^^just seemed forced...

    but overall this is a wonderful poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a great poem, flow was okay, so far this is my favorite poem by you.

    I really like the 3rd stanza

    Keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    Great poem!!! i loved it!!! thats how i feel!!! great job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*×FaÐ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ïê§×*~

    Beautiful... just BEAUTIFULL!!!!... ur poems are such a joy to read they r easy to understand and relate to... i love ur work!!! 5/5

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