This was a great poem keep up the good work ..check some of my poems out

I like poems like this. That set the visual and everything. 5/5
-Kakashi

Well.. this is really good and i like itt.
thanks for commenting on my poems even though they suck [=
meghan♥

Wow, again! Loved how you used nature to describe pain! I love doing that tehe. I loved this poem alot! Your rhymes and flow again were flawless. Really good!! I can't believe you're only 13. You write better than me. Tehe. Wonderful job, hun! Keep it up!! 5/5

Natalie``

That was a great poem i like how u used the through out the poem

This is pretty amazing the flow was great and the rhyming was good.
-meghan♥
p.s thanks for commenting/rating on my poems :]

Wtf. i commented this 2wice haha

Beautiful... just BEAUTIFULL!!!!... ur poems are such a joy to read they r easy to understand and relate to... i love ur work!!! 5/5

Great poem!!! i loved it!!! thats how i feel!!! great job!!

It was a great poem, flow was okay, so far this is my favorite poem by you.

I really like the 3rd stanza

Keep up the good work!

Another great poem...this is really good...and i love the title..it made me choose that poem to read for the last one i owed you(and sorry it took so long for me to comment you)...

but there is one line that seemed forced to me...

"But she's staring out of her silky eyes though."

^^just seemed forced...

but overall this is a wonderful poem.

I liked ur poem. It was good. Myabe you can come by and gimme some advice wit muh poems..i have only been writing abut a year and a half maybe 2 ..and i would love it if u would help me out.. and ill keep goin through ur poems and tellin ya what i think.