Comments : I Never...

  • 18 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    Ok, maybe this isn't that great a poem... but this wasn't meant for anybody else but me. so its possible that nobody else but me will understand it... so dont judge.

  • 18 years ago

    by Pain Remains

    I like it. When something happens beyond your control, you have to have someone to blame, even if its yourself, its what i do anyway. Poetry comes from the heart, and this certaintly did yours. Who cares what other people think, this is your poem, your heart and soul, be proud and keep up the poetry.
    Jade x

  • It wasnt your fault, you did do something.
    yyou cared.
    and dont be afraid to let him know it,
    you may be scared to say it,
    but trust me,
    it will make him feel good and special, and that he is important to someone.

  • 18 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    Chloe...
    i AM scared to say it. i can't
    help it.
    and... it was kind of my fault.
    i never did ttry hard enough. and just the
    idea that i was scared to tell him...
    that shows how crappy a friend i am.
    i never did say it... and that shows
    how obvious it is that i never tried.
    but i'm getting over it, and i'm moving on.
    thanks so much though. your the best friend ever and i'm so lucky that i have u here for me.

  • I really like this poem, it mean its written in a really unique way..