So Called Friend

by Dana   Jul 24, 2006


Hello dearest so called friend,
why are you on the ground?
Are you sleeping?
Your hands and legs are bound,
why's that?
I see that your bleeding,
you're unable to talk.
What is it your pleading?
Have you been hurt,
what did I miss?
I didn't see.
But let me ask you this,
why is your blood on me?
Why do i have a knife?
Oh I'll tell you why!
you ruined my life,
and now i shall ruin yours.
Enjoy the dark,the pain,the death.
It's more than you deserve.
Savor your breath,
for it shall be your last.
This is the end,
I will miss you.
Good-bye dearest so called friend.

** Criticism welcome with open arms..please!**

***Not a personal poem, I frankly have no idea where this came from, I don't hate anyone! ***

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  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This one is not so powerful but it was totally a freaky poem.. what's that a sweet revenge? or u mean to say a realy vengeful thing? actually u could have done much better on this one. for me, the title is so captivating and it was under dark poetry i'm anticipating for more powerful and intense one..

  • 17 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    Oh it scared me wen i read it till i read dat last part! i liked it tho kinda weird but good 4.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow thts deep..