Sea of Broken Dreams

by Dana   Jul 24, 2006


Alone,
waiting for the perfect victim.
anxiously prepared,
to engulf their lives with torture.
Sending a brick of waves,
to shatter their every dream.

Together,
the gust of death and I,
will sink you lower
and lower
until you can't escape.
Life will flash before your eyes,
but I will decide which events.
You will realize,
life's not worth living,
and you will give up,
and let me decide your fate.

I am the sea of broken dreams,
I'm sure you have heard of me.
Don't be too scared,
I won't get you for no reason.
Just don't get in,
over your head.

** Criticism welcome with open arms..please!**

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Every word that you wrote in this poem was wonderful. i am certain now that you are quite possibly one of the best writers on this website. your writing is just so honest and unique and it sets you apart from so many others.

    wonderful write. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetxMisery

    This is really good. Its scary how many times we can be screwed over. Its like its a sick game of life. We finally get somewhere and we finally feel happiness and as short lived as it was its taken away from us in an instant.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Tht wuz good..i liked it..