Tht wuz good..i liked it..

This is really good. Its scary how many times we can be screwed over. Its like its a sick game of life. We finally get somewhere and we finally feel happiness and as short lived as it was its taken away from us in an instant.

Every word that you wrote in this poem was wonderful. i am certain now that you are quite possibly one of the best writers on this website. your writing is just so honest and unique and it sets you apart from so many others.

wonderful write. 5/5