by Dana Jul 24, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A final reflection |
by Jenni
Wow. i have never read such a powerful poem about death. this is quite possibly one of the best, the details are so subtle and your meaning is very strong. wonderful job. 5/5 |
I enjoyed reading this one too but not as much as your first one.. the only thing i suggest fizing is the stanza's they arent spereated correctly liek the two lined stanzas could be put together and the first has an extra line |