That was great..very descriptive I can not be brutal, because I see nothing wrong with this Lol..And this is my honest opinion! it was great I gave you a 5/5

Wow for some reason when i read the first line i laughed.. but then as i read on{and noticed which category it was under} it really made me think.

Oh and that pirate poem i wrote was actually inspired by a song by senses Fail called Rum is for drinking, not burning but it made me think of the pirates of the carribian.:).

Keep up the good work!!

I like the way you repeated the title in every first line of the stanzas, great style. 5/5

Wow. my mouth is wide open after reading this. this was just so deep. your descriptions are just enough but not too much. 5/5