by A Christoffer Jul 24, 2006
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
For the Lord watches over the path of the godly, but the path of the wicked leads to destruction. |
This poem truly haunted me and the last line...is absolutely intense. This poem almost convinces you that believing in the Lord is for the best...but I'm agnostic so it doesn't really matter. Do you reall feel this way or were you simply writing from that perspective? |
I love most about your poems is they're very beautifuly written and speak your thoughts on God. Well done. => 5/5 |
"I am not afraid of ten thousand enemies who surround me on every side. |
5/5. CONGRADULATIONS! you made it on my favorites! Your a very talented writer nd i love how you write! |
by Leslie
I like the strength of what you have to say but i'm curiouse if the broken rythem is exactly how you like it. I owuld praise it for strengthening your poem if I was definate that was your intention. The poem is good, but is it really how you want it? |