A very strong opening to this poem. You really caught me off guard. Great topic to write about, and you are right about the wicked. I love how you brought religion into your poetry, it gives is such a powerful meaning. Nice work.

Very nice flow to the poem...And it was so amazing, my absolute favorite because I feel like this so often. Crying to the Lord to save me, to show me he's there, because of what's happened... Just an amazing write. Great job. This is your Best and Strongest poem.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I like the story of this poem, beautiful!!! not boring very enjoyabble though the format of this poem not really good i really appreciate the way u write and keep it up! job well done

god bless and takecare!

I like the strength of what you have to say but i'm curiouse if the broken rythem is exactly how you like it. I owuld praise it for strengthening your poem if I was definate that was your intention. The poem is good, but is it really how you want it?

5/5. CONGRADULATIONS! you made it on my favorites! Your a very talented writer nd i love how you write!

"I am not afraid of ten thousand enemies who surround me on every side.
Don't sin by letting anger gain control over you. Think about it overnight and remain silent."

This was my favourite stanza:)...don't know why..but it was..i loved the meaning and the power of this write..Keep writing, you ROCK.

I love most about your poems is they're very beautifuly written and speak your thoughts on God. Well done. => 5/5

Taylor

This poem truly haunted me and the last line...is absolutely intense. This poem almost convinces you that believing in the Lord is for the best...but I'm agnostic so it doesn't really matter. Do you reall feel this way or were you simply writing from that perspective?

~jas~