Rusted Blade

by Suri dawn   Jul 24, 2006


I had so many that helped me,
put down my sharpened blade.
You were there for me to talk to.
When I needed it,with you,I stayed.

But now you have forsaken me.
You don't understand what you have done.
You broke my hearts to pieces.
You left me bleeding and alone.

My blade may have rusted,
but my heart will never mend.
It is like taking a wife from her husband,
and expecting their relationship to end.

I now sit alone here bleeding,
from the heart you broke to bits.
Yet you still remain in the pieces,
because when put together,they still fit.

You may not feel the same,
that I will always feel for you.
"Friends always and forever",
is what we promised ourselves to do.

So my rusted blade I now take,
and place upon my wrist.
You normally would have seen it.
But since you're gone,you won't notice.

I slice my wrist one last time,
and for once it was for you.
I'm sorry if you are the one to find me.
I will always and forever love you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xxMagioxx

    Everyone has been heart broken but it hurts even more when your depressed, I know that feeling. Thoughts of suicide dash through my head when I think or her or see her in school. I am a worthless person that no one cares about.

    Tony :) well ima going to go finish my homework c ya later :D

  • 18 years ago

    by why me

    Feeling like that hurts so bad
    i feel your pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Robiie

    Becky, your writing is like a window into your soul, it is beautiful, Im stuggling with bulima, depression and dysthymia, characteristics or anorexia and some of anxiety, my medication has been made to 40 mg instead of 20 mg, but i have this to say to you, there are ways to the light from the dark, i gave up once and tried to kill myself, i still want to die but i have come along way from the girl i once was, i've seen the light and felt its love, thats what keeps me going, knowing i can be in the light, and so can you, it will be a long and hard struggle, you have seen that already, but a girl like you can make it through the darkness, i dont know you either but i feel like i have seen your heart, keep your faith in the light and never look down, you deserve the best thing a person can have, happiness

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