Wow! That was amazing..I am speechless That is the best poem I have read all day! great job 5/5

Wow. For such short sentences they flow really well. Love the language and the sentiment is so heartfelt.
Great talent, keep writing.

This is an excellent poem...but so damn sad....

I love the way you out such powerful feelings in a short poem. This is really good!

Ooooh, quite a haunting write. I like the whole jagged cliffs, really adds an element of hopelessness.
Also the way you crafted the ending, quite nice. Take care and keep it up~Holly