By the Same Knife

by Ike Dizzle   Jul 25, 2006


It was just like yesterday
That we were together
Holding hands
Like it would last forever

But it didnt last
As those words woke me up
You said it was over
You wanted to break up

As I begged and plead
You acted as you were deaf
You gave me the cold shoulder
You got up and left

I lay in my room
With my eyes blood shot red
My bed wet from all these
Tears I have shed

Anger running through my head
And into my veins
Thinking as I walk outside
And sit in the rain

Dreaming of what
I could do
To make you feel
Worse than I do

I ll walk over to your house
With a knife at hand
I think you know
What I have planned

Im here in the rain
Staring at your windowpane
Still thinking of the stuff you said
Which is making me insane

As lightning strikes the line
The lights are all douse
Nothing else to do
But climb your house

I climbed in your window
Tip-toeing to your bed
With my knife held high
Still thinking of what you said

I love you
But now your life must end
I stab you in your chest
And the tears began.

What have I done?
I have taken your life
We will meet again soon
I was killed by the same knife

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Good, I liked the story the most. I don't have afavorite stanaz, but sadly i do have a least favorite one, it's stanza six, purely because its far too short and ruins the flow a little.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Damn! that's what i call a broken heart! this poem as a sense of anticipation that makes u want to read on and it has a bitter sweet ending that ties it all together. 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 17 years ago

    by lisa

    Wow...thats intense..your really good at writing..this poem is def. my fav. that you have written.Its very real.. the true emotions are brought out and in vivid detail...great job...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Dark and unique! And many thanks for the comment! Peace and love!

  • 18 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Wow. That was a good one. There's a punctuation problem, but that's really minor. Good job, I really liked it. :]