by Ike Dizzle Jul 25, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
It was just like yesterday |
Good, I liked the story the most. I don't have afavorite stanaz, but sadly i do have a least favorite one, it's stanza six, purely because its far too short and ruins the flow a little. |
Damn! that's what i call a broken heart! this poem as a sense of anticipation that makes u want to read on and it has a bitter sweet ending that ties it all together. 5/5 |
by lisa
Wow...thats intense..your really good at writing..this poem is def. my fav. that you have written.Its very real.. the true emotions are brought out and in vivid detail...great job...5/5 |
by Gasttlee
Dark and unique! And many thanks for the comment! Peace and love! |
by Anonymous
Wow. That was a good one. There's a punctuation problem, but that's really minor. Good job, I really liked it. :] |