Remembering

by alyssa   Jul 25, 2006


You are the
the best
for showing me
a light
for a winning
battle i couldn't
fight
i will miss you
forever
and a hundred
times more
You are the real
deal and i'm
happy to say
you are the guys
that made me
this way
I lay at night
in a bed unknown
and remember
some faces i should
have known
i'm sorry my friends
i have not forgotten
but when your
so far away from
hope you seem
to rotton
Thank you for
everything
and for everything
i mean thanks
for being a friend
in between

(hard critisicm is the best and this is my first "poem" so hints would be good, and if u need to copy this
poem go ahead and use it)

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