Obsession

Love the intensity. and the way the words flow and move.
-miss brittney

Short poem but a style I'm starting to pick up where you limit or use no pronouns to make the poem deeper. Your poem for example limits those kinds of words and by doing that the reader can pick up their own meaning from the words.

P.S I've learned recently that some people may downvote because they just don't understand poems like this. So don't be discouraged if that happens because it's people who can read into lines that'll give you the best comments and ratings.

Loved the intensity. Sometimes short ones are the best. Nice use of language.

Aww I can relate to this alot! For it being so short it has a lot of power and heartfelt emotions shine right through it! 5/5