Not even time can heal my wounds

by shay   Jul 25, 2006


Some days i just look up at the stars and think about the day
the alful day whan worst nightmares became reality

it was a day when all was well untill the call
the call that sent me running for the door

the drive was the worst part
a drive that would normal take 5 minuts fealt as if i took days

the day lead to the call
and the call lead to the drive
which lead to nures telling me how sorry they were but my daughter my one and only true love of my life was gone ....... dead

this is the day that i replay in my head every day before i sleep
the day that keeps me up at night and in a trance all day

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  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    This poem was OK, but could use a little work so it could be ace. I think you need to fix the format of the poem so it looks more like the seasoned poem. There are also a few things that ruin the flow of the poem, but I think that is alright. Another thing, the ending of the poem was a little weak. But that too with a little work could be really good. I think you need to correct your grammar and spelling mistakes.

    Nice job...

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow. This is so sad. You painted a very sad picture. I never know if these are fiction or not, but if its real... I am so very sorry. I hope you are comforted by your writing, and that it gives you some distraction even if just for a few moments. Keep up the writing!

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