by Megann Lee Jul 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Verse One. |
by Goran Rahim
A very deep and full of emotional poem or song, great job / 5/5 |
by awww
Really nice! i only wish i could hear it so i would really know how it sounds like... 5/5! |
by lindzy
It hard to write a song but i think u did it very well, even though i obviously cant tell the beat i think it would make a good song, good job |
I sung it in my mind and it was brilliant. I just loved it.. It flowed nicely and was very sinister and sad... Great job. |
by Natalie
I've written a few songs, so I know what you mean by it's hard to critique it without hearing it. But, I actually liked it. Especially the chorus, It just sounded really catchy. But when you have the word 'babe' in there, I thought that was the only thing that threw it off.. cause it seemed like a real darkish/sad song, and I didn't think it went well. Otherthan that though, it was an excellent song. Keep it up! 5/5 |