When you cant see

by Kelly   Jul 25, 2006


When you cant see
it is not that fun to be the girl that had you

you didn't talk much
didn't listen much
didn't love much
and i long for your soft touch

you're confused
not sure
wonder what it was
but you still want her

so you left me hanging on a thread
nothing but our talks re-playing in my head.

but when you cant see
that when you are me
that its hard to see
i just need you to love me

i know i didn't ask for much
just to have you by my side
nothing but a touch
now i know why my heart died.

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  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    Sad but classic. I love to read poems like this. They really make me think.

    I loved this part the most:
    When you cant see
    it is not that fun to be
    the girl that had you

    you didn't talk much
    didn't listen much
    didn't love much

    5/5

    & Thank you for the comment on my work. =)

    LOVE LOLLI
    xx

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