Breaking Point

by ...   Jul 25, 2006


So long weathered, worn and ruined
Dusty dry and dirty Eden
Golden in the worst of ways
Parched, just one too many days
The future, so unclearly certain
Masked by blind hopeful delusion
Sad, sullen, clueless cattle
Fight the inevitable losing battle
But rolling clouds of ashen grey
Fight the burning glare of day
Rumbles like the roars of giants
Spell salvation through deadly silence
And, what none thought destined
Fell from the sky like liquid diamond
From heaven coursed the earths redemption
A newborn chance of resurrection
Farmers scream the words feared spoken
Its over now, the drought has broken

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great and unique piece, with excellent choice of words.
    I really enjoyed in this one.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Dusty dry and dirty Eden.

    That is by far my favorite line. The poem was great, and even though I wasn't intirely sure where you were going until the end, it flowed nicely and came to a great ending. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5