Comments : Breaking Point

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Dusty dry and dirty Eden.

    That is by far my favorite line. The poem was great, and even though I wasn't intirely sure where you were going until the end, it flowed nicely and came to a great ending. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great and unique piece, with excellent choice of words.
    I really enjoyed in this one.
    5/5