by Tammie Jul 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Running |
by Tara Kay
This was very good, i liked the repetition, and the ending summed it up perfectly, keep writing |
by Goran Rahim
Nice job once again, i luv ur poems. 5/5 |
by Kristina
Wow i can relate to most of what you said in this. great job. i really like it a lot. really sad poem but a great one too 5/5 |
by Misstress
Oh how swift is the poem. |
Great poem and the structure was terrific and creative...exactly wut i expect from u! u have some amazing skills and its great to watch u improve and write about so many different topics...nice flow and te ending was really good also... |